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Yeah, I made that a while ago, and the symbol is from my comic.  Nifty.

I'll figure one of these out later, in the meantime, I'll just mention that you misspelled "achieve" as "achive".

Yeah.

agreed.

Comments?  Yeah.  That's...interesting.  Living way up in north Idaho, most fantasy never makes it to where I am.  If that's unoriginal, I definitely haven't read it's predecessor.  

Anyway, enough rambling.  The story is good, so far.  I liked the last paragraphs, though I am thoroughly confused as to what was going on.  I am always confused, so it's likely not you, though.  The conversations were, as you said, a bit broken, though I could follow it easy enough.

My main complaint here is gonna' have to be the absolute lack of spaces between paragraphs.  More often than not, they make it easier to read.  

Yeah, good story.  I generally have to read something two or three times before I catch most of the problems, so I'll probabaly say more later.

Also, Peanut gallery?

judging by your signature, you already have alot to do, so why not add another!  

nifty  

So, then, something like this?

I'd love to help ya' out, though I'm a little busy for a while, right now.  Maybe another time.  I shall look forward to the final result, though.  Good Luck!

I'm a highschool student, still.  Never really had a paying job, other than mowing my grandma's lawn last year.  I always plan to get a job, but always forget, or am too lazy, or some other cheap excuse.

Yeah, I played RuneScape awhile, but have long since given up due to a slow connection.  That, and the game got very repetitive if you didn't pay them.  Money hates me.  That's the only explanation I can think of as to why I never have any.  At least, the only answer I'm willing to offer.

Yeah, the least I can say here is; "Ditto"

oh, lest i forget--again--diprotodon.  And yes, I am still interested in a site.

Anyway, has anyone glanced at my site?  If so, what'd ya' think?

Phew.  I was afraid that I was bits and pieces!

So am I only partially finished, or just not created in your mind.

I knew I shouldn't have asked.

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...I'm proababaly goin to regret this, but I'll bite- What am I?

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...I know I probabaly shouldn't hav asked, but oh well.

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