I would like for the good community of Xepher to critique my webcomic. I've been getting some feedback from various people, but no one that really runs a webcomic.
So, you guys, I ask for your help! Please say anything you will about paneling, speech bubbles, art, plot (or lack thereof) colors, anything! This is to help improve what I can on my comic and to help me take critique like a man! I'm trying not to make this a pitch as I am a 'Look and tell me what's wrong!' or, you know, if I'm doing anything right? ^^; Thank you so much, really, I appreciate it.
The basic idea of my comic 'Golden Crystals' is a fantasy epic sort of comic. There's no intentional punchline at the end of each page. The plot-arch as of now is in the middle of the first, so things are a bit confusing, but that's kinda where I want it, but you tell me what you think of that.
please please Please give me whatever feedback you can! I really appreciate it!
http://golden-crystals.xepher.net