Okay...
It looks cool. But looking cool and being functional are entirely different. The 2 links lower down (3, I suppose...forgot to count the boat) don't show up at first, since I have to scroll down to see them. Most of the time, you want all the links to show up immediately. Heck, it took me a bit to realize I even could scroll down...I probably wouldn't have caught on if not for the fact that you mentioned the boat, here on the forum.
The boat link is...an easter egg? Is that what it is? Or is it eventually actually going to serve some purpose? (The image it calls up is pretty cool, though...it just seems sorta' pointless.) Maybe a gallery, or something...I don't know.
The 2 "Under Construction" pages, the forum and the market, seem common enough. I've never made a store of any sort, so I'll say nothing further, there.
The "Explanatorium" link is broken. It gives me a "404, file not found" error. Besides that, I'm pretty sure Explanatorium isn't a word. If you knew that, then okay, it sounds cool. If you didn't...well, now you do.
The "Storyteller's Hall" and the current chapter (top book in the stack in the archives) seem to be exactly the same. Why not just make the Storyteller's Hall page forward to the newest chapter page?
Lastly...what's with all the empty space at the bottom, below the boat? All that empty space takes time to load, ya' know. Sure, I'm on high-speed internet, but not everybody has that, ya' know.
Okay, that's my complaining. Despite it all, the site looks impressive. Just...ya' know...a lot of it seems pointless, from my perspective.
I'll actually get around to reading the story, someday. Really. Maybe sometime when I don't have a million reading assignments I'm behind in, already.