The art's pretty good. You've got a nice variety of angles and poses with simple, yet expressive lines. You also specifically spiced up some repeated images by using different angles. That's all really important when you're drawing panel after panel, page after page.
I'm not so sure about this being a comic's beginning though. It really follows the song which sadly causes a lot of single panel pages and some repetition. Neither are too great for grabbing and holding someone's interest
It's not a terrible problem, just hard to fairly judge because this is a stylized opening. Overall, I think you'll be able to do well.