*brain churning random thoughts*
Okay! After a hectic moment of thought, I decided that, "Maybe I should ask first."
I have something, you see, that I would like a bit of critical advice on. How's my writing style, what should be improved..that sort of thing. *nods*
But....it's a wee bit long, and I'm not sure if it's appropriate to post the first chapter of something or whatnot in the forums.
So, a 'go ahead' or a 'naysay' (and where to put it if there's a naysay) would be appreciated!
And here's the prologue for ye to chew on:
Prologue ~ Ab Hinc ("From here on")
"By three methods we may learn wisdom: First, by reflection, which is noblest; Second, by imitation, which is easiest; and third by experience, which is the bitterest." ~ Confucius
It is often said that the Norse God Odin, great Hunter of the wilds and keeper of the souls of fallen warriors, had but one weakness to his name... His unquenchable thirst for knowledge, which cost him to lose one eye to Mimir, keeper of the well of wisdom.
Well shall we heed this tale of an ancient humanity. The oath must be kept at all costs.