Xepher's disclaimers do tend to be interesting, don't they?
Well...that'd be at least as regular as my work. I think the schedule itself is unimportant, as long as you at least try to keep it. I seem to recall something about more than once a year, though that may have been elsewhere.
Your writing is good. Made me think of some things I wrote in creative writing class last year. Mine was, of course, a lot shorter than yours, since I had only 10 minutes to write it, but yours is an awful lot more detailed. It would've been nice if you had more to go on, but what you've got is excellent. I can see why you want a different host, though. The ads are a touch intrusive.
The one thing I can't tell is if you made the site yourself, or if it's a template. If it is a template (which it looks like it may be) you'll need to make a site somewhere just to prove you can.
Other than that, it looks good (at least to me). A Thumbs-up from me.
I ain't Xepher, though...
